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My story

There was a little boy named Daniel, he was always a fan of sports. He wasn’t necessarily the best at play sports, he played football, soccer, and basketball.  Kids would always make fun of him because he was little and dark. His favorite sport out of all of the sports was basketball. His parents were divorced and he was feeling left out because his family wasn’t supporting him. Daniel practiced everyday at the park around the corner of his house. One day he was about to quit but that day he quit a older guy came out and gave him a motivation speech, and also started teaching him new basketball moves. Everyday after school he would go to the park and practice with his new coach. 3 months later he was ready to play anyone, and he went to school and beat the kid that was bullying him by 12 points. This doubting from everyone made him grind even harder later on payed of with all the time he put in. This taught  me a lesson to never give up in the thing I love.

Literature Analysis

 The plot of this story is about Chris Kyle  a navy seal. This was a story about the most lethal sniper in u.s military history. Chris Kyle always dreamed about being a cowboy.  Near his thirties he decided that his life would be different, something where he could express his real talent, something that he could help American in its fight against other terrorist. So he decided to be a navy seal, his life at home was turning ugly because his wife didn't want him to be in the military when his kid was born, and after he was back he managed to take care of his relationship. He had 160 kills confirmed, in American he's still a hero even though he was gone early. I believe in this story the theme is the strong culture of the masculine oriented aggressiveness, competitiveness, and hard worker for the military. This story inspired me to help out other people in need. The author Chris Kyle morning routine  was getting up drinking some coffee, using the toilet. After that was finished

Literature analysis a work in progress

This book America Sniper  I heard is the best war book. This book is based on a true story.  I honestly haven’t read the book that well but, I read the intro about himself and it touched me how the way he sacrificed for his country. Also he was one of our well known soldiers in America. The reason I got this book is because I want to be joining the military.

My big question

       Why do  people get fevers or headaches? I womder If there’s a cure for not getting sick. I’m my theory I believe that there will be a cure one day. I hope. Also make sure there will be no more diseases.

The weekend review

This week we talked about plot diagram. We also read a story called “wife’s story”  it has everything we learned this week. So we learned how to improve our skills with our essays. Everything we learned this week was in our notes about the mountain example. In our notes we had everything to make a story spectacular like how to start the story with exposition in the begging. We also talked about rising action, climax, falling action, and resultion. These are the key topic to a good story.

The plot Thickens

Do you like action ? Then you’ll love stories that are driven bt the plot. Here’s some good evidence to a good plot. I believe every story needs an exposition. The exposition is the part that informs you with information. Second there’s a inciting incident, and this gets all readers attention. Whenever this happened it go’s to rising action then ends up going to climax. Climax is usually the most fun part in the story also the most important. Third there’s a falling action, where you finally start to realize the story. Lastly is the resolution,  you know the story already at this point to know how the story is ending.

The right to your opinion

What’s mine is mine. In other words, what I feel or think is mine, and this is what an opinion can be described as. The reason why I have a right to my opinion is because it belongs to me, and what other people feel belongs to them. An opinion is not wrong because it isn’t a fact just something that is a feeling or thought towards something. I think that everyone has a right to expresss their opinions because nobody has to agree to them. Everyone deserves to have rights for something they believe in.

The Making Of An Essay

              Writing an essay is really complicated when you don't know what to write about. Usually when I write an essay I listen to music to regain my focus and get ideas while I  think . Other people hate essays because they think about the paragraphs. When I  write my  essay's  I  don't even think about the paragraphs  I write until my writing looks good enough to read. My most recent essay had me stressing but once I new my topic it filled me up with joy not having to worry about starring at an empty screen, so in my opinion writing an essay can be easy if you just write about your topic and to not think about how much writing their is.

I AM GSD

                     To be honest being an independent learner helps me focus more . If I work with someone I know I usually stay of task and don't do my work in class.  Whenever I work by-myself I get stuff done but, I get stressed out more because I usually don't ask for help. My  most independent class is math and that's my most hated subject, It's hard to be independent in math because im also not that good at it. I realized iv'e been doing a good job as an independent learner because my work is being favored.

WRITING ABOUT LIFE AND DEATH

                                  The story Katha Upanishad is aligory because it relates to death. This story is talks  about Nachiketa a teenage boy that’s hero and successfully doesn’t fall into temptation of death. He wanted honesty only. Most people need to nearly die to wake up in the real world. Most people usually depend to put their life in God’s hands.                                       Nachiketa believes being in teen life is around the best time because you could always be curious. He got three wishes also from death he didn't really care about his two wishes but didn't want to pass on them, the most important wish that he  wanted was the third wish. His most curios wish was how results turn out after death. What death offered him was money, fame, any other thing that makes you happy in life but, Nachicketa didn't want to stick with his last wish so he stayed with his main original wish which made death excited.                                     The